56 line contest

On July 1st, 2008 FireDart says:

I liked it, good job.

On July 1st, 2008 looloo2734 says:

interesting

On July 1st, 2008 mclean45 says:

neat

On July 1st, 2008 Cornell says:

you should try adding more lines.

On July 1st, 2008 jake219 says:

its for a 56 line contest

On July 1st, 2008 Cornell says:

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On July 1st, 2008 Cornell says:

test

On July 2nd, 2008 author3 says:

It needs more life it feels somewhat dull, but pretty good Indifferent